OK, so I messed up some things. Had a fight with my girlfriend and dodged a couple of flying rings. To be honest it was stupid, really. She thinks I was flirting with some girls, so I laughed cause I thought it was silly. Ha, the reaction I had planned went differently in my head. Next time I know to think before I speak, or smirk about what she said. All in all if she would sit down with me, everything would settle in it's place. I want to marry her, but every time I get the chance I freeze in the face. The nerves kick in, and from there it all goe's down hill. I don't really know if she feels how I feel. Then again the spark is so strong it could light up the world. So here I go no more fighting me. Right now is my best chance for me to get down on one knee.
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freestyled a poem about love.
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Sorry to hear that you and your girlfriend are fighting, just try to hold on and keep holding onto the faith, well written dear poet good luck in my contest

