a brown paper bag filled with two winks
ony because three wouldnt fit
and if it was just one
it wouldnt be filled
how they dont escape
no one knows
with only thin paper walls
why they dont break through
i cant understand
the great scientists dont either
with there scenice stuff
they cant figure it out
so brillant idea came to my mind
i'll ask the winks why the dont
simplys climb out the crumpled bag
the reply was most odd it was...
silence!
Author notes
random i know
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Lovely!!
This poem is so simple and sweet. It's beautifully written. It holds good for the theme of my contest. There's no flaw that I can point out other than 'only' instead of 'ony' in the second line. Very well written..
Best Of Luck!!
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the title is too perfect. i like this, but is very strange. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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LoL definetely random. It made me laugh... it was cute.... thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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thanks a bunch
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LOL, a very interesting way to go about this, you must agree
Funny, made me laugh. Thank-you so much for your entry in the contest 
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i wanted to make it a tad differnt and twist the words a bit lol
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I agree with pixie the poem made me smile as well. The scientists being baffled was a nice touch.
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Isn't a wink when you shut only one eye? crazy poem.made me smile!!! good luck!
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haha yeah just a little but i like random member... thats all i am. haha i love it... wut exectly is a wink?
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