try to keep away from you
but somehow you're still here
try to ran away from you
but somehow i cant leave
try my best to forget you
but the pain is so strong
consuming me slowly yet
its so addicting its hard moving on
try to keep you distant
but closer and closer we get
no longer as lovers
but as bestfriends
to have you away
is to feel alone
such misery and sorrow
no point to go on
critics and critics
word after word
shameful and hurtful
yet they make me so strong
what ever you guyz think
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heeeeeeeeey me gusta lol i especially cuz you se pero well dont be so sad yo tqm lol 4realz though...
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payasita triste
hey u thanks 4 da comment and readin my borin stuff.....love ya sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much 2
dont ya eva 4get dat and no matter wud u knoe am always gona be there 4 u
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I have been waiting to see wut new poetry you would come up wit..and this was beautiful..as always.
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blueyedbeauty
thanks so much for the commetn really really appreciate it...yeah am back its been a while since i've writen much but da inspiration is back..thank u one again 4 da commetn and k.i.t much love
~*SMILEY*~
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Wow. That really touched me. I know it's from the heart. I really love this one. I know what you mean. I feel it. I feel it inside of me. I especially understand the critics part. I've realized that I shouldn't care, because at the end of the day, they really don't care, and yes it does make one stronger to go through that. Wow, see this is why I love poetry, because I, and others as well, we put our life into words. And as much as what we go through hurts, poetry sort of makes life easier. You know what I mean? Great one Smiley!! Keep it up, and we gotta get together sometime. Like old times. Luv ya!!!
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Lady Wicked
hey bubbles
grl thanls so much 4 da commetn really appreciate it am glad at least u knoe wud am saying love ya so much dont worry soon we'll hang out
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