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Jack

I am a skeleton,
alone in the night.
If you see me,
I'll give you a fright.

My handsome features,
are made of clay.
I can bend and twist,
in a crazy way.

If you look at my clothes,
they are only black.
I have a name,
and it is Jack.

Please tell me what you think

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  • TeenFailure
    February 19, 2007
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    Haha Well i can honestly say it got a chuckle outta me. Were you watching the Nightmare Before Christmas when you wrote this? I liked how it all flowed so well and how it was serious/funny. I believe you have an amazing talent keep up the good work