In my wildest dreams did I think I'd ever miss
you the hungry way that I now do.
I find myself longing for your laughter
as the days slowly pass through.
Throughout the years we fought
some we were standing side by side.
Others we were at war against each other,
In these it seemed a part of me would die.
But now my little boy you've grown into a man.
And in my dreary heart I know you must move on.
To find what new adventures that lay ahead.
But there's a silent void here since you've gone.
So to my baby boy who has finally left the nest.
Know that I think of you each and everyday.
Hoping fate brings along only the best in life
And you can find true happiness along your way.
I light my candles of blue and white nightly
In hopes of the safety they will bring.
Each evening I hug your image ever so tightly,
Wishing everyday for you will be spring.
9******************************************
Jacki D. Eastridge
February 19,2007
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I can feel the sadness in your words. I am sure it must have been a very hard thing for you to deal with. Children move on and it is hard on the parents though I am sure in time you will come to accept it.
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It's good to hear that you have been washed clean. I've been dipped into the sewer a time or two myself and it is always good when we come out to begin life anew. Love isn't always easy.
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Beautiful
I really enjoy this poem. This may sound weird, but, if your name wasn't posted at the bottom of this poem, I would be convinced that my own mother wrote it.
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Dear Jacki,
I only had three daughters to miss when they left home.
They say mothers miss their sons most and fathers miss their daughters.
Of course, one of my twins died and then the other, aged 30 and 49 respectively That's when the real 'missing' starts but my surviving (elder) daughter lives in the North Island with her husband and though I see her every six months, I miss her.
I can relate to your feelings, especially because I know of some of the struggle and hurt you have had to endure in bringing up your son, all of which forges an enduring love in your heart.
Your poem is eloquent and worthy of more than the meagre applause which this system allows.
Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.
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I think only a mother truly understands the love of a mother. Fathers look at things logically, where we tend to be more emotional. No matter how many mistakes we have made, or our children have made, there is a bond that simply cannot be broken and when they wander away from us, the ache that’s left behind can be overwhelming at times. I have felt that ache. But I have been blessed in the sense that it was short term because three of my four children live within close proximity to me once again. But for that one that remains 1800 miles away… I have a longing… for the sound of his, the laughter, even for the drone of that dreaded music he listens to. Even when relationships aren’t what we would want them to be… there is still a sense of comfort when you have them nearby. I feel your pain here. I also feel the amazing love you hold for your son and the desire you have in the way you wish him well.
♥ Touchof1der
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Aww
This is amazing so beautiful shows ur love for your children it is always nice when people show positive emotions for there children Keep up the good writting -
this is very sweet. i like it.
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Good
All my children are grown with families of their own. But I remember well how difficult it was to watch them leave the nest and learn to fly. I promise things will be different once you adjust to the empty nest and begin to think about yourself for a change. Enjoy life now that you have the time.Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
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aww..that's so sad. Saying "goodbye" even temporarily to one who has been your life is tough...thanks for sharing this
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"I never thought I'd ever miss
you the hungry way I do
I find myself missing your laughter
as the days goes though."
One. Heartfelt. Two. Heart-touching. Three. Beautiful!!
An applause for each is well-deserved!
Clap. Clap. Clap.
Blessings,
Sophie.
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WONDERFUL
it has something special and simply lovely hidden within those simple and yet so powerful lines!beautiful!keep up and be creative!
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Awwwww this is sweet. We young people miss home a lot when we're gone. But we never really understand it from the parent's side. It is awfully difficult. It's a complete change of lifestyle! You go from taking responsibility for someone else's every need. To not having to. "baby boy " reminds us that we are always mom's baby. No matter how old we get!
It does sound a tad hallmark though! Maybe that's why it's an almost tear-jerker! lol!
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very well writtern. Beautiful piece. Congrats. Loevely imagrery in the piece. I love the last stanza - a really great ending to the piece
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Excellent
Og Jackie, I know the feeling. When Robbie moved on his own and 3 1/2 hours away, it broke my heart and made me lonely as hell but I knew it was for his best and that for him to grow he needed to grow..(make sense?) It sounds as though your son has finally grown up though. We can breath now!! I remember a time when we both were holding our breath and hoping so very much that both our sons would make it this far. And guess what, THEY HAVE!!
Love,
Rene'
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WOW...If only some (specific) body would say just the last four line to me... wonderful!!!
Take care.
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Hi Jacki
Been a while, and a while still, hasn't it?
I like your poem Jacki! Guess you're referring to Eli!
I'm glad he is all right and testing the waters. If he's half as great as his Mom, he's going to be just fine.
The poem is superlative! I joined St.Eps XII three years ago and am doing great. Chaired a meeting for six before I let someone else do it.
Be good, we're still friends.
John
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aww
its always so difficult when they decide to test the wings we give them..best wishes..beautiful write..
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