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Sweetness

I'd give anything to see you smile again
If I had the power to wipe away your tears
To go back through the years
To save you from the pain
To shield you from your fears

To share my life with you
To share in your hopes and your dreams
To give you everything
To be a part of something so wonderful
And to have the happiness it brings

I have found the missing pieces
You have it all inside of you
You have every single thing I need
You consist of the perfect substances
As even my greatest expectations you exceed

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Yeah...I wrote this and now I feel dumb about it, I would delete it, but because I think it is a fairly decent poem, I'll leave it. I'll leave it here unless I decide I can't look at it anymore.

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    April 29, 2007
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    Completion...

    Total and utter pleasure...


  • nell
    February 19, 2007

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    this is beautiful and just swoons of love.. how we can find so much in each other is a beautiful thing and you have expressed it wonderfully.

    shanelle


  • She burns
    February 19, 2007
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    Awwww just so beautiful and full of hope, love and dreams, How you want to make that person happy, giving everything, your heart and soul, wanna share your life and create everlasting memories, to grow old with each other, together forever