Think again! -- you're not the master.
you're My bloody slave in vowed bondage.
Which wax-figurine do you wish to be,
the one crucified before all religious eyes?
My words titanium chains encircle your fears,
you must adhere and obey, My pet
your sexual satisfaction, O/our elusive reward.
your cage of punishment will be My choice,
the cuffs draw blood, leaving only sensual-rage.
No romance! no soft glowing candles,
I'll flog & flog till dawn does raise its head.
See my fork! -- its three spiked tines?
I must reinforce My [holy] domination.
your leather-hide bares My inlaid words,
caress My whip and entice your pain.
How securely will you need be collared
as I drive home the anal probes?
Blissful agony retains your submissive body,
when electricity flows through your brain,
My kisses' fangs will rip you wide!
I shall, now remove my fist of ice,
replacing with gilded spreader bars.
Prepare your soul for its destined goal!
Author notes
Option 2 the BDSM word bank inspiration:
Master/Submissive/Domination/Slave/Whip
Flog/Bondage/Obey/Pet/Punishment/Reward
collared/fist/pain/leather/chains/wax
candles/fork/cuffs/spreader bars
anal probes/Electricity/ice
All words used
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well then..
... Aren't we just forth right. I must say this was written with a lot of agression in it and flowed nicely. I liked the poem a lot. Thank you for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. kassie -
Thank you for your contest submission. Well then, an interesting submission, hehe, to say the least. Well done on the use of the, uhmm, interesting word bank for certain!! Not usually a fan of this sort of punctutaion, it fits in this piece quite well!! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Hetohke'e *
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thats just awesome...lol i love the way you made it happen with all the words... it has great imagery to go with it too... i can almost feel your slaves pain
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WOW....
it's almost eerie and scary how you penned the sexual intensity of a D/s relationship.
I have never read it penned this way.
You did a wonderful job...
Sahabah
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