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My Mask

My masked face,
And worried heart,
All concealed,
Believed truth.
Unwind the character,
Let her grow
Soften the face,
Heal the hurt.
Watch her blossom.

A contest entry

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  • willowprincess
    February 19, 2007
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    thanks for entering my contest, your poem's great, but unfortunately it doesn't follow the rules. it needs to have the title 'Behind the/my mask'. you can either change the title, or enter a new poem. thanks

    • Island-Gal
      February 20, 2007
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      This is the second time i have changed the title. What is it your looking for? "It needs to have the tittle Behind the/My mask" It's tittled my mask.


  • ThankfulSoul
    February 18, 2007
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    Great write.