One single tear
What does it mean?
One little fear
Why is it there?
One little cry
What was the cause?
One little good-bye
Was it too good to be true?
One heart broken
Will it ever mend?
One final I love you spoken
Why did it have to end?
You walked out the door
Why couldn't you tell me why?
Was it something I said or did
Or was it just time to fly?
Why didn't you tell me
Did you think I couldn't understand?
Why did you leave me
And will you ever come back again?
A contest entry
- EMOTIONS by live in love.
475 points, ended February 19, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre Write Contest by SensualWhispers.
615 points, ended March 15, 2007, 100 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Round Contest!! Anything goes this first round. by FightOffYourDemons.
300 points, ended April 7, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING! Seriously ANYTHING! by A Murderous Lament.
390 points, ended April 2, 2007, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such universal emotion...I can see why you got silver! Congrats and great job on this.
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Thank you for your kind wonderful words
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Wow
How did I miss this poem of yours? Goodness gracious. It is so tender, so emotional, so full of hurt. You are amazing good at wirting your emotions. You've done a fantastic job here. I am glad you entered this one into my contest. Thanks and good luck to you. Kassie -
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I'm glad you liked it enought for a silver thank you
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the tears flow
I am in tears...I have to stop reading your stuff it's ripping a whole into my heart...but it hurts so good. Finally someone who knows how to feel who knows how to express what they feel and who is willing to share it with us. You are the most amazing poet ever I would gladly pay to have you published...I mean it. -
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Awe I feel almost bad my writing causes you pain but im glad you think its good enough to be published
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wow this is so intense... and so full of questions. i hope that you find some answers soon and can manage to move on... well done on a fantastic write
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Thank you this write hits home unfortuantley from more then one occasion
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Another nice write from your pen, sad but lovely, well done
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i really feel this poem and it really says despare to me and lonliness and longing and wishing for that person to comeback or just explain themselves and i belive it is beautifully written
good luck
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Thank you thats exactly what I was going for glad you enjoyed it
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