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The Forest Altar




written to the melody of:
The Forest Altar
by Mairéad Murphy (mod 27 by me)

(technical tip- right-clicking on the music link and choosing 'new window' is one way to have the music playing while reading.)

a magical medieval lyrical tale...





(musical intro- two measures)


(harp and viola)
Three forest maidens at an altar bare
                                  so pure, in hopes of princes fair…

(flute and piccolo)
Sleeping on cold marble stairs 
              three forest maidens, in loneliness, there
heard three horses, and rose to stare
one looked wide at me 
                                and captured my heartbeat
there…
 
(harp interlude)

(flute and piccolo)
  To the forests
              forbidden to all men
three princes rode from their native lands 
                                far beyond the mountains:

Over fields and gardens
        through the autumn swirling
                  past the summer cottage
                            in the springtime rain, when

  maidens came a dancing
          maidens were a playing
                maidens went a singing
                            in the morning springtime rain…

(harp)
Over rivers and mountains, cold
    on we rode
              to reach
                    the forest of the maidens, old…

(solo cello and bell)
Tall I rode,
                      I caught her smile-
    she, of the sunlight
                      graced golden, and fair;

                “Ho! So smitten!” They chided me;
Ah, but we all knew
                              that love was a’raining there…

(harp)
(at the forest altar stair… )


(cellos)
The guardian forest
    spied three princes
        “Who so ride-eth through our forbidden trees?”


(harp)
(at the forest altar, grand…)


(mandolins)
As we paused in wonder there
snow all around us flew, stinging and rare 
wreathed in white shadows, and mists of gray
    spirits of three princes
              and three lovely forest maidens 
                                                      danced!


(dance) (flute, piccolo, harp)



(cello)
On the forest altar, bare
dreamed a pure maiden, of princes, who came
riding, searching, for maidens pure
wreathed in beauty, wrought from the deep forest colors old…

(harp)
(at the forest altar, cold…)


(high cello)
Searching far and wide
            no heed to mortal dangers
for maidens of the wood
              who were fated to live     
                                          for eternity there…
                                                   
in loneliness, in the glens 
              in lonely melancholy in the glens…

(harp)
(at the forest altar, cold…)

   
(solo bass)
“Halt, three princes!” the forest hailed; 
“Though you be princely, you court danger in here!”
“Come, ride closer, so we may hear
    and feel your heartbeats, to know
                        if your hearts beat both true and bold!”

(harp)
(at the forest altar, old…)


(flute and piccolo)
Then in the forest glen
            deep in the magic woods
      three maidens and three princes were granted truest love…
and were joined
              at the forest altar old!                                               


(solo harp)
In a forest old
              three maidens pure and fair
with three true princes
                          married one another there…


(flute and piccolo)
At a forest altar bare
                  three lonely maidens, so pure and so fair
    with three princes shown true and bold 
                                  there found the truest love-
                    at the forest altar
old.


(harp)
…at the forest altar, old!

   





     

Author notes

I like Megan's scores for her lyrical quality (and compositional skill) She also brings order to my chaos...

 

 

 




 

Poems/Scores to the Music of Random Goldfish:
(in reverse chronological order)

Thinking of August- Now or Never http://allpoetry.com/poem/5893739

Thinking of August- Duo (piano and cello) http://allpoetry.com/poem/5660705

Thinking of August- Acoustic Grand Piano http://allpoetry.com/poem/5892115

Thinking of August- Electric http://allpoetry.com/poem/5435359

Sweet August Days to Come http://allpoetry.com/poem/5423787

Sometimes... Faces http://allpoetry.com/poem/4940637

The Moon Tonight- Christmas from Ireland http://allpoetry.com/poem/4895079

Then the Merry Fiddlers Came http://allpoetry.com/poem/4885481

'Round a Grand Carousel http://allpoetry.com/poem/4778751

Two Souls Rooted Deep Within http://allpoetry.com/poem/4776245

A Dream- Where the Water Sleeps http://allpoetry.com/poem/4756347

Lune Sings http://allpoetry.com/poem/4397931

Gas Pump Music Duel http://allpoetry.com/poem/3449548

Chained in Silver http://allpoetry.com/poem/3385242

A New Autumn Day http://allpoetry.com/poem/3308104

Merry Merry Wiccan Wiccan Friends http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3293000

In this Wilderness a Love of Old http://allpoetry.com/poem/3244044

The Sable http://allpoetry.com/poem/3239364

Donkey Feathers http://allpoetry.com/poem/3238828

The Obsidian Tree http://allpoetry.com/poem/3059430

The Forest Altar http://allpoetry.com/poem/2648314

The Snowy Banks http://allpoetry.com/poem/2646132

 

(some scores modified by me)

 

 

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  • Random Goldfish gold member
    June 12, 2007
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    Wow...I see the story in this...the words seem to sing along to my melody. ^_^


    • wbiro gold member
      June 12, 2007
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      thanks, Ms. Composer of the music! I did enjoy 'enhancing' the music... I hope I didn't leave any 'funny' notes in it like The Obsidian Tree so far! The words here aren't quite perfect yet, either, still tinkering with those... now your pic- I see a Japanese anime character...! (my daughter is heavily into it, so maybe my perception is skewed!)


      • Random Goldfish gold member
        June 12, 2007
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        Haha...I'm into anime...not as much as I use to be though. My hair is not that colour anymore...I'm done with that "phase" just like my mom said I'd grown out of. Now my hair is just its good ol' Irish red.


  • vampira1665 silver member
    February 21, 2007

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    Wow, that was simply amazing. Such beauty. I love your mind!

    Hugs and bites, Your Partner in Death


  • myrataal silver member
    February 19, 2007

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    Absolutely brilliant!

    Totally mesmerized I read, and textured the path by forest's open riddle ... How romantic the love of a fairy tale real; how soft the green kisses of leaves upon cheeks.



    Love
    Myra

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