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Words you said

"Turn on the music...
So they don't hear the screams"
I think I will,
So they don't hear my cries
when I lost you.

"I love you and
I'll never leave"
But you did
and left me alone
To face the world myself.......again.

"I promise....
I'll never hurt you"
What happened to that?
You just ripped it out
put it in a blender.
Smoothies anyone?

Many things you said
Many times you lied

I've died over and over again
but it took you to finally kill me.





Are you happy now?

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  • makeout kid
    March 7, 2007

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    ha.
    the words spoken here are the words spoken by my ex.
    we just broke up.
    [&& he's a walking contradiction.]

    beautiful write.
    i can relate to your poetry.


  • oh willoughby
    February 18, 2007

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    i like what you got
    the angst is good
    but put in some love
    either the love you felt
    or still do feel
    that'll make is sadder