If I took all the things that make up my world
What would I be left with in my hands
Would I have anything at all
When I look back would I see my heart beating
Or would it be a hollow shell
After I've cried for the same reason a million times
Would the well of salt water behind my eyes eventually dry
If I fell would there be anyone there to help me
Or would my body just stain the dirt
And if I looked you in the eyes right now
And told you how I really felt
Could you even understand it
Can your mind even fathom it
I know the answer before I ask
It's why I simply slink past
Because if I took all the things that make up my world
Tallied the total and settled the score
I feel like without you I'd be empty
Devoid
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderfully a great piece of art to read.
"Tallied the total and settled the score"
not sure if I understand that part,but I understand this part....
"I feel like without you I'd be empty
Deviod"
Good job,and thank you for your comment.
LadysDragon -
True to the letter
Empty? I can't help but agree with you, yet at the same time ask, 'why empty?'. I wish I knew..
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This one is pretty good, the rhyme scheme throws me off a little bit
-Marvin
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THIS IS AWESOME. You know i think you're like the best emo poet in the world right. That is what you would have, friends, family, and poetry. I mean without those how could anyone get by. But this poem is awesome. Very deep. Great is the only thing i can say it is.
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