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Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)

I made a mistake
Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
But when you told me that
I walked away

When I think back now
I start to cry
From all the good times
We shared

I made a mistake
Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
But when you told me that
I walked away

You were there for me
As I were for you
But then it all changed
And we came apart

I made a mistake
Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
But when you told me that
I walked away

Late at night
When I want to call you
And ask for help
I stop my self

I made a mistake
Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
But when you told me that
I walked away

Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
For Everything
Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
I know I let you down

Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
For Everything
Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
I know I let you down

Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
For Everything
Gomenasai (I知 Sorry)
I know I let you down


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  • Daniella elizabeth
    February 18, 2007
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    MMMM

    Hey I like it....I do have to agree you do repeat yourself but I think it make it seem more feelings of sorry. I love you alexys and you know i'm here for you i'll ttyl chicky keep writting


  • wings of an angel
    February 18, 2007
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    This is a great poem, saying sorry to your friend but you seem to repeat yourself alot in the poem, apart from that its great good luck in my contest