Once I called you blood
You were only there with me
Because of family obligation.
Even though you were never very good at it.
Once I called you a friend
Someone I could go to to
Help remind me of my place in this cold world.
Even then it wasn't your harsh words but what you
Didn't say that hurt me.
Now I call you my sister
In the beginning you may not have
Been there for me and hurt me
But now you're at least trying.
Let me tell you, I may be cracked and tainted
But I still have you; My blood, My friend,
My Sister.
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This is what I wrote for my sister for Valentine's Day.
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely....
Well, should I give it away that I be your sister...or keep it a secret..damn guess I already gave it away. The poem is ture to every word. It does hold a lot of emotion and at the same time a lot of love. Which to mean is good...because I do love you & I'm not just saying that either.
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this is good
i felt every word verry powerfull!!! keep it up!!!
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wow
This is a really good poem. I love it, this is sweet and shows true feelings. Very good. -
this was kinda sad but happy two. this was loved by me and my sister ashley. we tolk the time everyday reading over one hurdrend poems a day a this this by far the greatest i've read. its nice to that i and my other sibs. but one gets along and want to spend everyday together we have fun helping eachother and other people. thanks for sharing hope to meat you in real person someday mabe our brothers and sisters can once play together. thanks for sharing and god blees hope you help just as much fun wrighting this as i did reading this. SIGN: DI. and ASHLEY
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