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Belong

To feel like one belongs is essential,
without that sense one feels like,
they have little reason to live,
for it is like living in a world as a shadow.

I am unknown and unnoticed, unseen and unloved,
so I question myself of my purpose,
I ask myself if I commited suicide,
would anyone even notice?

My façade has ingulfed me,
and I can no longer lift my mask,
I can  no longer be myself,
my personality changes day to day and sadly,
I find that past decisions are destroying me from within
I find myself in a maelstorm of past hurts and weakness.
Vi veri universum vivus vici,
quod pessum ire mei.

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  • tender-butterfly
    July 22, 2007

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    Nicely done

    This is sad indeed and so filled with emotion. The speaker in your write seems to be so isolated from everyone else and is drowning in pain and suffering... The emotions are quite strong.