I hate it when you ask me
when you know I'm not okay
I hate it when you smile
and look the other way
You can't handle my tears
so you push them to the side
You can't calm my fears
so you find somewhere to hide
I hate it when you ask me
when you know I love you too
I hate it when you lie
and tell me I mean the world to you.
You can't handle me leaving
so you pull me close
You can't stop the crying
when you know that I know
I hate it when you ask me
when you know I'll believe your lies
I hate it when you hide from me
and blame your foolish pride
You can't handle such a simple girl
one who only brings you trust
You can't understand
that all she ever wanted was your love..
I hate it when you ask me
when you know I'm not okay
I hate it when you smile
and watch me walk away
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Something In The Way
A contest entry
- |Teenage Wasteland| xFuck Up's & Screw Up's Enter Herex by Dead Star--x.
300 points, ended June 15, 2007, 14 entries
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i like this.. i dont know what to type or tell you for advice, you've left me speechless x]
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Awww, thnx
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hey im michelle i saw ur poem sumwhere & thoguht id say hey.....its a good poem..i hate liars 2 right now my fiance is crushing this other girls heart cuz she deserves it and she dont even belive us when we say that hes cheating on her cuz he has 12 times & we even have dated and timed proof ya know...anyway...
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this is sooo good! im absloutely in love with it... its beautiful!
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wow i know exactly how you feel. i've gone out with so many guys that are like this. they lie and they expect me to believe it and i always do. but in the end i know that it was lies and i get hurt. they can't handle seeing girls that love them get hurt but they have no problem hurting them. i hate guys like that and yet every guy i've dated was just like this. they cheat and they lie and i forgive them. I guess i'm kinda naive thinking that they might change when i know they won't. well great write. keep it up!
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