There's blood on the walls
The smell of death in the air
Noone knows what happend
Not a damn clue
But I know
I seen the whole thing
I was there
I remember what I saw,heard, and felt
Don't believe me
It's true
You know how I know
Do you really want to know why......
I'll tell you
Tonight.......
I, Heather Dubs was murdered
A contest entry
- The Victims Eyes by vanderner.
500 points, ended April 10, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Murder by Blossom.
350 points, ended May 3, 2007, 20 entries
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wow
written in the victims eyes
very well written
wow
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Very nice. Kind of threw me off there. lol
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nice one..great job!
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Great poem liked the twist well done
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A clever poem, I wasnt to sure what was going on untill the end then re read it a few times, I did enjoy this poem muchly and thank you for entering it, I wish you and every one else good luck!
P.S Giant Monkeys prefer the cities cause from high above, there are just very few ants! -
yeah i really liked it... Xspecially since I'm into the whole DARK stuff... keep up the amazin' work!!!!!
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clever poem
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I love the turn at the end. I thought it was an eye witness, but the last line changed everything. Very clever. Keep up the good work!
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