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Goodbye for Now

We've reached the end
It's time to part
We'll miss you lots
Remember all the good times
And maybe the bad too
Tears will fall
Hugs will be given
Then you'll leave
And we'll go on
But we'll remember you always and
You have a place in our hearts
Maybe one day, we'll see each other again
Goodbye for now.

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  • Blooming Poet
    January 21, 2008
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    Goodbye is hard, you've said iiit very well here. Goodbye for now.


  • Game Master
    March 2, 2007

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    That reminded me of when my best friend left. She's on this site, but I'd rather talk face to face ya know? It was really a good way of saying goodbye without really saying 'I will never see you again' kind of goodbye. Very well done.


  • serenity silvermoon
    February 19, 2007

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    this was a great peom. alot of emoshin in this good job. i loved you peom it had alot of good thoughts sorry for the lost though. and god bless SIGN: DI.


  • wings of an angel
    February 18, 2007

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    This is such a sad poem you penned here, written with so much emotion. Good luck in my contest, well done dear poet

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