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Sweet Surrender

secret pools
of floating frangrance
bathe two souls
in subtle warm pleasure


As two beating

hearts surrender
while bodies intertwine
in new found passion


discovering

the treasures
of  their seduction


mysteries
revealled with each

 tender caress


 

leaving

life breathless
and engulfed

in a lover's flame


as two spirits

take flight

and soar


between this
moment in time

and heaven

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  • penman gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    Wonderful

    What a touching and creative expression of love.


  • Endeavor gold member
    February 26, 2007
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  • Endeavor gold member
    February 19, 2007
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    Excellent

    You have a very denifitive style in you writing

    The words are a fine reveal of yourself

    Like the blend of passion and care

    like this

    discovering
    the treasures
    of their seduction

    mysteries
    revealled with each
    tender caress

    All wonderfull

    Rick


    • mypassion
      February 19, 2007
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      Rick

      my one true fan..lol

      thank you....I was hoping it made sense
      considering it has been the firsy thing written
      in almost 3 weeks...

      hugs,me


  • Shakes-spear
    February 18, 2007

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    Great!

    The background so adds to this as it makes me feel relaxed. Love is really great and this is really nice. You never let me down, Bubba


    • mypassion
      February 18, 2007
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      thank you bubba

      you never let me down when comes to my mushy love stuff..

      hugs and kisses,

      sis

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