My hand in your hand and your hand in a bouquet, to give me a flower.
A contest entry
- A Line only for 16 and Under! by .
300 points, ended February 19, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So sweet and beautiful!!! Well done my beautiful strawberry.
Congratulations on the Gold.
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hmmm interesting one liner.. imagery and metaphor, beautiful combo! great job and congrats on the gold!
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butiful ........ good luck in the contest .... cheeky
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Wonderful and unique!
Thank alot for your entry.. It is appreciated. Best of Luck..
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awwww. hope the hand doesn't get stuck in the vase. That's the only thing I would change..re-word that somehow so it doesn't sound like he's reaching into the vase, but just reaching for a flower from the vase..just an idea.
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Thank-You for your comment but I changed it to a bouquet!
**$h@Mz**
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