Empty darkness,
Tremble and fall
Layers reaching, sinking
Covering
Not a sight of love
Joy and laughter
Nor warmth
In the cold desert,
A heart without a feeling
A hollow shell
That I call home
Drifting, living, dying
A disguise from feeling
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Slitting this wrist
No purpose, no life
A release from
Anger, sorrow, depression
This life
No merciful voice
Heard, listened, advised
Promised
Drenched in blood
With music, and alcohol
Liven this world up
Until it is the end
Of it all.
Author notes
Just another bad day, like always.
Please tell me what you think
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So you had a bad day, huh? Even though the sun sets, you can have faith it'll rise again. That's all I'm gonna say.
Cassie
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Cassie,
Lol...Just that my heart wasn't feeling alright...The desires comes back and it really tears me apart, just feeling the loneliness again...deepens it. No worries, I'll be okay in time. -
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I really hope you are!
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Great
This poem is great
It really gets to the heart of how you feel and shows what it is like to feel this bad.
It is easy to relate to, I've done the whole alchohol+music=slitting wrists thing, kind of upsetting but still this poem captures the feelings beautifully.
I like it
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Aww..Thank you for taking your time in reading and commenting this pieces.
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