Dear Mother, Dear Father,
I have a story to tell you ,
you may not want to hear,
but it is all true,
remenber me ,your child,
when I was only a small child?
remenber me,your child.
Heartbroken every fall?
There was so much more to me .
my innocence was lost
you turned away from me .
Your child and left me to pay the cost .
I was so young , so niave.
I thought you loved me
parents protect their children .
They are not blind ,they can see.
He hurt me so bad , mommy
he made me bleed
he stole my soul , Daddy
My eyes you could not read .
I was so young
I was only seven
he said he loved me
It was hell not heaven
now here I am mommy
an adult with my own child .
Do I forgive the past ?
Do I know how to love?
Do I have hatred in my heart ?
No I have faith in GOd above.
He will protect me , HIs child
He will not let me die .
I am his child now .
Please do not question why .
A contest entry
- Rape, Abuse, Assault by silencethequestion.
300 points, ended May 5, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sadness and Misery by thedevilsgirl.
324 points, ended May 30, 2007, 45 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me cry by Storm-Goddess.
300 points, ended November 11, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh, and who could forget these?*clap, clap, clap*
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This piece actually brewed a few tears in my eyes. It was beautiful in that you showed your faith in your father, the Lord. Though life throws sour lemons at us, we can still make lemonade with sugar additions, to move past the darkness and taste the sweeter side. Congratulations on the silver and good luck in the other contests! This piece was emotional, as well as deep. Keep up the great work!
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I'm sorry I can relate to this.....no one listen to me when I cried out...and this expresses the anger and pain of that...you wrote this so wonderfully...keep writting your very talented
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thank you , it is not an easy subjest to write about , but writing helps me deal with it
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Very sad write you wrote here. I can relate to the pain and the abuse. But I had forgive and let all go. Good luck in the contest. May better days happen in your life.
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thanks , I am healing from it all
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i love this. This has so much power and so much emotion in it that my eyes teared up. You are an amazing writer. thanks for entering the contest. -
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thanks for the comment , its something that I wrote when i was in patient back in november trying to deal with the anger that I had inside ,
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Excellent !
You have written a very moving poem. I almost cried. I hope this was not a true story, or what a sad life you have had. I will keep you in my prayers from now on. Keep up the great work. -
Excellent !
This is a very good poem.. It strikes you when first read it and it is very well written. Keep up the great work,
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Excellent
A child should not go through life, suufering abuse, in the very hands of their own parents.
It is not right.
My heart hurts, for those, that are going through this.
Great write my friend.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
*S* Cynthia -
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thank you , this was a hard one to do , but I had to get my feelings out , thanks for your support ,
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Oh this is good. You speak of the pain of abuse and emotional neglect. Who can understand why a parent would turn their back on a child who was abused. But we are always a child of God and he never turns his back on us.
great job on this.
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thanks , I wrote this poem when i was in patient back in november . We had to write a poem on how we felt about the abuse we got , It was a hard poem to write but I did it ,
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Good, I really liked it, It wasn't what I expected, it was even better. =] Keep writting!
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thank you , this is the only way I can get my feelings out is in writing ,
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Wow such a powerful and spiritual write so full of love for our Lord. So full of pain and emotions. Excellent write
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thanks again , its my way of geting my feelings out
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