Magnetic.
South and snow, crisp.
Northward; lucent ink.
Sundry shapes –
meaningless.
Author notes
A somewhat naturist metaphor of writing.
I've noticed my work becoming shorter, but I have nothing more to say...it's unfortunate.
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Such powerful images captured by so few words but you have done so well with this beauty. Thanks so much for sharing this! Smiles, Terry
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its true... sometimes you say more with less... but usually only when you feel like you really did or know you did.... Your unsteadiness towards the poem lead me to beleive this is not the case with this example presented here. Although, it may be right around the corner in your next short poem.
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this is a beautiful write, sometimes we only a few poetic words to say, it may be for a short time or for a long time, as long as we keep writing we can't completly loose the inspriation for writing... I have been there, more than once, and it does come back.. great wording in this poem, evn though it's short, it is very sweet..
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I would not say this is meaningless,
short yes, but sometimes it is waht the feeling drives us for at the moment and instant of inspiration.
so in a way it is more of fourtunes fancy here than unfortunate. This is beautiful image of winter crisp and fresh! I like the meter you imployed here as well.
very simular to Mrs. Crapsey's work as well. Nice work.
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Short is not a negative thing, you poem speak volumes through it's five lines. It is very good, and makes the reader think along different lines.
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One does not always need to fill a page with words to fill anothers mind with images. This is a perfect example. Well done dear poet.
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