Sixteen swans sailing on a sparkling stream,
feathers soft and creamy as a childhood dream.
I watched, enchanted by their majesty and grace,
this avian armada pass me by--their place
in Nature so assured that God, beguiled,
from far and distant Heaven, duly smiled.
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LOVELY
Thank you
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Love the title, love the poem!!!! So wonderful this one os Bill! Your imagination is great.
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This was another great one from you Bill.Much said in this short piece flowed perfectly as well.i loved it.well done to you and good luck
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brilliant
this is brilliant bill, flowed like a stream, excellent work again ,good luck in the contest,
regards,
floorboards.
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Something as beautiful as a swan can only come from Gods design Bill. A short but beautifully descibed piece. They are so majestic arn't they...mal
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Well that's definitely different in a delightful sort of way.
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