What if the Grey's
Were once like us
A perfect human form
But somehow they have changed
Through events that would amaze
Be it gavity and lack of sun
A million year advanced brain
But they want it back
Our simple human form
That we have come to love
So they're stealing back
The DNA they once gave us all
So they can come back home
And be at peace once more
Are they the long lost people
Of the great Atlantis
Preparing for they're return
To the world they once loved
Author notes
THe Grey is the little Grey men that so many have claimed to have seen, Most believe that they are experienmenting on Humans. What if they were like us once and they are just tring to get back to their old form, It would be kinda cool to learn from them and here the stories they have to tell. More food for thought.
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ATLANTIS IS MY PASSION!!! Many kudos to you for this my friend!
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Hi Charlie!
You do give us food for thought here. you mind does get to releams, your very thoguhtful and caring. thanx for the read. Dolores.
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excellent
Very thought provoking write indeed, it would be very cool to listen to their stories, but if they are testing things on the human form as it is now, how could we listen to their stories if they aren't interested in telling them to us??..see very thougth provoing piece..already has me thinking...you do have away of getting the mind going with your writes...Great Job and fun to read..and ponder your thoughts.
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This is a very thought provoking poem. The content of this poem seems different than others that I have read by you. I quite like this. You have given me food for thought.
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very nice write
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The Idea
The idea behind your poem is such a great idea. I would have never thought of that at all. It's a great thought. Your poem is good too.
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Very Interesting
I quite imagine in a sand locked land,
visions of water are quite in demand.
Atlantians I`m sure, long since par boiled;
their belief in self, inherently soiled.
D eity
N otion
A doration !!!
These are my visions of our recent past;
I`ll pray every day `til I`ve breathed my last.
Your poem is excellent, food for thought,
Let us never forget, what God hath wrought.
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Woah.
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An interesting topic..Good you have these ideas to intrigue you, as we pray for you back here..I like your humour" so they're stealing back the DNA they once gave us all So they can come home and be at peace once more" "The people of Atlantis."...When one thinks of powers in the universe...Maybe you are not off base after all! A creative write, bringing some thought provoking consideration! Good write!
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After reading your words the title makes a whole lot of sense. Interesting point of view and why the hell not... who knows the answer or the truth. The mystery of Atlantis melding with the Triangle and moving into the 'Grey' as you put it. Yes you do have vivid imagery with thoughts to ponder over. Your lines flow with ease and do make for a very original read. Thank you for the lingering thought. Penned with you talent ... good luck in the contest...powers of the universe works for me.
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