Is the wonder gone?
The excitement
The mystery
What made me tingle
What made me sweat
Has it faded away?
Is it realy lost?
The nights we shared
The sunlight
The laughter
Wanting and not knowing what we want
Is it gone?
The art inspired
The courage
The freedom
Lost?
Do you still ache for me?
Long for me?
Do I still send you reeling?
Steal your breath?
Consume you?
....No....
Please don't answer....
I fear it is better not to know....
Author notes
This is a freewrite, not meant to rhyme or anything. I just needed to write...
A contest entry
- Rhymes and free verse by misticmoonlite.
850 points, ended May 24, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like this free verse piece, well written and stands on its own, thank you for this entry.. good luck in this entry
Linda
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I really like this one, it's a very beautiful freewrite. I can feel the emotion and I can relate a lot to it also. I hope things get better though. I love how the concreteness acts as a stream to almost represent your stream of conciousness! The title goes perfectly with it, and I know its not really part of the poem, but the backround and really the whole presentation does nothing but help enhance the poem in every way. I love it! you should write more like this! keep writing!
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A tremendous poem and loove the way you wrote it.. exploring every corner of your heart lots of expressions and manifestations of love very alive.. when you give you enrich the other and enhance his/her own sense of aliveness. Giving is an exquisite joy and brings to life what is reflected back and make the other person a giver also and they share again.. Love the pic and totally inspired. Thank you! xx
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Love it.. Your emotions are all over the place in this one. You have gone deep into your soul and placed everything in front for the reader to see.
Great job
Soulful Woman
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