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a Wish

    O my heart! be strong
  be the generater,
  You have to extinguish
  the fire of hatred,
with the shower of tremendous love.

  Look!you have to be the sandal
  to heal the wound of violence,
  you will be the messenger
  of hope for the helpless.

  You are a piece of God-being
    I bow before you,
  you are vast than the ocean
    the world can merge in you.

    I have many dreams
    for this world and the man,
    you will be the device
    to fulfil every of them and you can.

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If you will dream beyond,can see beyound,can go beyond.

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  • duana
    May 27, 2007
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    wow, you have nailed life- that simple. Beautiful.

  • pozo
    May 17, 2007
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    Hopeful piece. I saw this as quite a pacifist piece.
    Thanks for your comment
    Pozo


  • Kram
    April 19, 2007
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    realities were dreams

    it is true that realities were dreams once.it is nice to have a chance to read such poems thank you

  • Rajaram
    April 15, 2007
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    Powerful poem with nice composition

    I wish all your dreams come true. Very nicely composed poem Sneha. Wonderful lines like, "Look!you have to be the sandal to heal the wound of violence,". Great work dear. Keep your imagination flying to produce such wonderful poems.

  • Rajaram
    April 15, 2007
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    Thank you Sneha for your valuable time and wishes. I am honoured by your presence in my page. Hope that you would make more visits and stamp your impressions on my poems. I am a professor of Engilsh in Tamilnadu and I would be happy to know about you. All the best.


  • Blueskywonder
    March 17, 2007

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    This is intensly powerful... quite moving. An exellent job of expressing your feelings. Werll done... thankyou for sharing.


  • My Darkness
    February 21, 2007

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    i agree with you 100% and what a amazing write to express that! you are very strong with your words, and very convincing! thank you for sharing and keep up the great work!


  • JoyfulWriter
    February 20, 2007

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    A very deep and profound poem here..full of beauty and expressed so very well...I really enjoyed reading this! Smiles, Terry


  • Sonja
    February 18, 2007

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    Very nice, thoughtfully and deep written poem. Somehow it reminds me about Shakespearian sonnets, although this is not written the same way. Nice done.
    ~Sonja~


  • Spiritual Nature
    February 18, 2007
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    Wow, this is really good. I love stanza four, best of all. Great job.

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