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Psychopomp Psilosophers

Psychopomp psilosophers
impluvious with invisible soul-tears
transporting nyctophobiacs praising darkness from afar…

In the scrippage are valpulatory implements
to atone for the passenger's hideous gluosity.


Author notes

psychopomp- someone who leads souls to the place of the dead
psilosopher- a shallow philosopher
impluvious- drenched
nyctophobia- fear of the dark
scrippage- baggage
valpulatory- flogging
gluosity- gluttony

'soul-tears' is one word...

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  • JazzALTernative silver member
    February 18, 2007
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    Move's along well as a poem. Word roots help interpret language. Makes you wonder where we are going with all this - writing about what we fear most - death, women, the past, the future, fathers, may I say - etc. A feeding frenzy...


    • wbiro gold member
      February 18, 2007
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      thanks, jazzy, I guess I shouldn't reveal what I was envisioning then...!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    February 17, 2007

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    I am sooo glad you included the definitions here. For a minute there I was feeling like a thick tongued drunkard, slipping over his own words. I would have been lost without a dictionary on this one. But looking over it the second time, after reading what each word means, I can appreciate the meaning you have infused with so few words. Good luck in your contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    February 17, 2007

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    Wow, what words you have used. Thank you for putting the definitions below, I will be the first to admit that I would have been lost without it. lol