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why do i love you

Why do i love you
i covet your kiss
center of my world
when did it become this
what did you do
to make me feel
i held out my heart
you made the steal
please take my hand
my heart is bate
don't let us die
that i would hate
i want to be held
your body i must feel
alone with out you
myself i could kill
only for your love
i could slit my wrist
i love you so...
can i say I've been kissed
you are my poison
don't stand and stare
take my sorrow
take my despair
with out you
i will not lie
with out you
i want to die
i love you too much
my heart i give
take it now
so that i might live

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    Yes..love is the only cause for which we all live and bring a meaning to our life..you are very beautiful while expressing it..well done...


  • She burns
    February 21, 2007
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    Just so touching and very heartfelt, just how so many girls feels this, all they ever wanted was to loved..
    I love this so much, it just explins everything, from pain and tears, beauty from the heart, as always and forever


  • Wind Shadow
    February 18, 2007

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    sounsd like you really love the person you're talking about here. I hope things are working for you.