Warm touch of life
Dearly beloved
Let them live in happiness
Never to stray from love
Till death do they part
Cold embrace of death
Dearly departed
Their souls make their journeys
Together, as they were in life
Till death do they part
Beautiful light of heaven
Peace at last
His faith brought him Home
But took his lady from his heart
Till death do they part
Dark fires of Hell
In the supposed peace, she suffers
Longing for her love
Her other half
Till death do they part
United in life
Separated in death
Two halves, one whole
Worlds away from the sanctuary of their unity
Till death do they part
Author notes
Not sure where this came from, but I'm rather pleased with it. Please tell me what you think and any suggestions for improvements are welcome ^_^
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Comments
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Sad story, interesting poem! I like 'the sanctuary of their unity' suggesting something sacred.
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OOoops!
lol forgot stuff like....my name
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Righteous! lol that was awesome something totally different and hey it doesnt rhyme!!! Nice work! Proud of ya! this is amazing sounds something like i would write, well the idea of it anyway but i probably would have started weird and ended weird lol I like this!! very much!! Im almost out of WB I just hope I dont jinx myself
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Nice ^_^
This was interesting... Not quite what I've seen you write before but I liked it a lot. I love the last stanza because it just tied up all of the loose ends and made the feeling you gave through the poem stick. Very very well writen, great flow. ^_^ You're a master!
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