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A friend

I have a friend
Who is perfect for me
He listens to all my problems
No matter how dumb they may be
He likes himself for who he is
And never tries to change
He tells me to be myself
And that I should never change
He was shy on the phone
But he would still call
And we would talk for hours
About nothing at all
We would talk about love and life
And discuss what we ever wanted
He knew just how I felt
And how happy I could be
He listens to me patiently
But never judges what I do or say
He helped with all my problems
And never went away
I never once felt judged by him
How much that meant to me
That I could tell him all my dreams
And he would listen to me
My friend never goes and tells
What is dear to me
He keeps it all bottled up inside
And doesn't spread it like a bee
I am thankful for that friend of mine
Our friendship will never end
And He will always be there
For he is my friend

Author notes

This is dedicated to my friend, the love of my life....I want to thank him for being my friend.I love you Dawg ...LONG LIVE THE RCW......


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  • crystallynnbradford
    September 19, 2007
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    friends are forever man!


  • Heavens Child
    May 12, 2007

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    A friendship like that is rare indeed. You are very lucky to find such a wonderful person that you can share your heart with. Thank you so much for your poem.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 26, 2007
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    well written
    and it is very sweet
    the flow is wonderful
    the whole poem is amazing


  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    April 11, 2007

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    this was really sweet the flow and structure of this poem made the rhythem hard to grasp but still was a great write! and wow bright! hehe.....keep writting
    and I'm so happy you have this friend....
    ~Chrissy~


  • Heavens Child
    April 3, 2007
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    This is sweet in its simplicity. Thank you for entry in my contest.


  • gottabesomebody
    April 2, 2007
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    very true to life its great to have a friend like that.
    Thank you for entering


  • Angierie
    March 21, 2007
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    Oh.. and please put what family member you would like to be.

  • Angierie
    March 21, 2007

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    "He was shy on the phone
    But he would still call
    And we would talk for hours
    About nothing at all"

    Oh how I love that stanza!

    Great write and thanks for entering!!

    Angie


  • honey bear
    February 18, 2007

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    as i read this my heart was all softened up and i was going *aww.. how very sweet* and then i read the name of your friend and had to giggle ha ha ha it sure brought a smile to my face , lovely write though, good luck inthe contest and if ever you need a poopy scooper for that guy of yours ha ha ha


  • Princessdove
    February 18, 2007

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    Nice poem. It sounds like you know what you want in a friendship and thats good. Great job with this. Keep up the good writes.


  • James L Williams
    February 17, 2007

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    Beautiful Write.

    This is a very touching poem. I feel that everything you write about the person you are writing about feels the excact same way. Very great write and thank you so much for entering my contest.

    Luke

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