I’m a victim of circumstance
Lost in my trance
Harold shipman urges
And Manson surges
Rip through my being
The evilness freeing
War is not an art
Murder comes from heart…
Slaughter comes naturally
Long life unnaturally
Guns are future swords
Love is my words
Hate like alcohol
Is a human poison
Media’s in control
Murder comes from soul…
Evolution’s my soul mate
I cheated with fate
And let loose Bipolar
Fuelled by solar
English is orgasmic
Truth is so tragic
I stand where no one stood
Murder comes from blood
Everyday my time slows
And this beast knows
Waiting for the pinnacle
That I am cynical
That destroys strife
Waiting for the first life
That I take apathetic
Murder is truly genetic
My body shivers to its core
Longing for much more
Led me to a darkened place
Where I had no face
To my horror I did want
This for this torrent
Suicide is unnecessary
Murder is purely hereditary
Holding your centre so tense
Makes only anger sense
Releasing is really relaxing
Epiphany is social axing
Media is the norms heist
Charlie Manson is Christ
This society still affects.
Murder is better than sex
A contest entry
- Anything Goes... As long as it's deep... by CrystalJet.
450 points, ended March 3, 2007, 93 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Uhhh... that is kinda different. I don't know if I like it, it seems a little too much to say that murder is okay, or am I just not understanding. The rhyming also sounded a little off, I don't know how. It seems everyone else like it, so maybe I'm missing something. Good luck in my contest.
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POwerful. and your writig was a different style this time. i like it. and the repetition of a new murder phrase at the end of each stanza was amazing. i loved it.
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This is just powerful
I don't know where the cadence of this came from but it is so intense. The power of the cadence is made stronger by the fact that your words ring of truth. Humanity stands on the wall of madness and is only too eager to jump into any fray. Your poem points this out so well.
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