Where do you go to bury broken hearts?
Hell...to watch them burn.
Where do you go to when you're loveless, alone?
The depths of dispair- to fade away.
But I've had too much of this
too much of this
too much of this
life is moving on
with or without you
so should I
so should I
No more hanging on
No more crying over you
No more wishing that your affections would approve me
No more making myself a slave to unrequitedness
No more, no more.
Lights out, farwell. No more...of you.
Author notes
personal...but not so personal. lol. hope that makes sense.
A contest entry
- Emotions by tawk.
425 points, ended February 18, 2007, 27 entries
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Comments
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Wow I like this alot this was wonderful hun
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Great Write
You can definately feel the emotion in this...I know exactly what it's like to have to let someone go...it's one of the hardest things ever but you know in your heart that it's for the best. Especially when all you want to do is make them happy even if it means they're happy with someone else
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But but...jackster I luuurveee it
kisses, stupid unrequited love can go play in traffic.
I love you [:
♥
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lurve you toos becca
where you been at? 
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oww.. that IS strong! and rejecting! kinda true and it has a "new life" written all over it!!
goodluck with that!
gr8 done sweets!! gr8 done!
me
xxx
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strong..piercing write..powerfull..good one...
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TY Sammy
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A love gone wrong such a painful and emotional write. Good luck in my contest
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