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Black Love

Misanthropic views to guide my soul
Out of this chasm my seclusion holds
Descent into Hell has let me be
This wicked sin of blasphemy

Caressed in vile arms, I see your eyes
Tainted in humanity’s last long filled cry
For we are sin, for we are the night
We kill, we rape, we extinguish the light

Come, my horrid little lover
Death beckons we kill another
In the name of love’s sweet massacre
Hand in hand tonight we will slaughter

Ensnaring my lips your tongue entwines
My lovely decaying mouth of hell divine
Another body stripped bare of flesh
Blood splatters across your mouth I ravish

Hands caressing, tongues probing in delight
Hands stained scarlet in macabre light
Never let go of the darkness, my little one
For our profession of death is never done

Author notes

Anime: Noir
It's from Mirielle's point of view towards Kirika. (Yes, they are both female)
I love the anime but so much is left unsaid to the character's emotions towards each other and the pain they hold, so I sought to write a darker, more realistic outcome.

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Comments

  • natasha-laurena
    February 17, 2007
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    brilliant

    think this is really great
    so descriptive!

  • MoonlightBeam
    February 17, 2007
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    wow

    Wow this is deep. It has so much graphic writing but it's really good. Wow!