I don't want to make a good first impression.
I want to be a lasting influence on someone's life.
I don't want to be judged for what I don't accomplish in life.
I want to be criticized for what goals I master.
I don't want to be remembered for my downfalls.
I want to be remembered for my generosity and kindness.
I don't want to cloud the room with negative issues.
I want to be the rays of light in a storm-filled atmosphere.
I don't want to be the topic of gossip.
I want to be a vision of Christ like devotion.
I don't want to be popular and liked for shallow thoughts.
I want people to admire the depth of my heart's empathy.
I don't want to wear the latest fashion.
I want to be clothed in a demure, humble approach I take of life.
I don't want to be more like any movie star or singer.
I want to be admired as a survivor who is respected for her honesty
and perserverence.
I don't want to have a large amount of aquantainances.
I want to have close friends who will be there no matter what comes.
I don't want to be reminded of my faults as a parent.
I want to be praised for being a role model and counselor to my daughters.
I don't want to make "A +" grades in school.
I want to know the material in order to succeed in the field.
Last of all, I don't want to be a negative influence in anyone's life.
I want to share my faith and experiences as a positive light in this dark world we live in.
Author notes
Personal thoughts and remembrances put down on paper for all to see. I borrowed the picture from another poet.
A contest entry
- INSPIRATION AND MOTIVATION by Jeremy0826.
550 points, ended May 3, 2007, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful!
This is very beautiful, moving, and inspiring.
I love your honesty and sincerity here.
If everyone felt this way, the world would
be a much better, safer, and more beautiful
place to live in. These qualites that you
carry forth in your life, tell a lot about
the person that you are. It's great to read
something such as this. The world could use
more people like you! People who love life
and appreciate all that it has to offer.
It's not about wearing the latest styles
of clothing or the amount of friends that
you have in your life. Nor is it about
popularity and fame. It's about seeing
where you stand in life and admitting to
all of the things that you have done wrong.
In an effort to learn from them and lead a
better, healthier, and more productive life.
I really enjoyed reading this one!
Thank you very much for your entry here.
I wish you the best of luck with it in
my contest! Keep up the wonderful work!
Jeremy0826
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Now that the contest is closed. I feel I am able to comment. First of all, thanks for your praise. I am deeply touched by your reply. I am so delighted that you enjoyed my poem. I invite you to read others. I am almost speechless. You have really made my month with your message. I am all choked up. Thank you. I intend to read your work as well. God bless you. Take care and keep penning my friend.
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Wonderfully written
Great job you have penned here for all to read and know the person, that resides inside of you. Enjoyed this so much, done with feelings.
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What an accomplishment!
Shelly, Short of being criticized for "mastering your goals" it seems to me that you pretty much have achieved your "wants", at least as far as those of us who know and chreish you are concerned. Like you, this is an admirable and worthy work. It's upbeat with a focus on the positive loving goals that make you into the woman you have become. As always, its a pleasure and priviledge to read your work. Thank you.
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EXCELLENT
Spoken as a true CHEYENNE maiden:we should all read this poem you have penned,Life is a learning process good and bad,we become the things we choose to become also good are bad.You have shone just how it should be done useing your self the greatest example Thank you
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I think this says so much. Has so much passion and love for life.
Negitivity never did anyone any good, and it's nice to see some positive thoughts written.
You have done a magnificent job in describing emotional thoughts of who you are and aspire to be.
I'm glad our paths have crossed Shell, a blessing you are...
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Thanks Jeffro, you are always there with quiet fortitude. I am always delighted when you send your comments. You surprise me every time. I am deeply indebted to you in many ways. You have mentored and encouraged me. I look to you to learn more about poetry. You are an inspiration to me. Thanks from the bottom of my heart. Blessings to you my friend. PS I'm sure BI would agree with me. You are like family to us. Take care. Shelly
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