Six seconds is all it takes
For him to betray you,
take advantage
and purge what is not his.
No more will you have virtue
it's gone forever
and he won't be able to give it back
Forgiveness?
Out of the question.
He stole from you
what was most precious.
And now he'll never be free of guilt.
A contest entry
- Six seconds by She Stole My Voice.
300 points, ended February 24, 2007, 8 entries
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Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Many Options. Come in Choose a Few by KittieLyyn.
300 points, ended June 8, 2007, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is very good
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I can only imagine what you are talking about in this...I like it. It's definitely true though. I like your honesty. It's a good write. Thank you for entering and good luck to you.
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The anger and passion that comes forward from behind your word is immense, and perfect for the type of poem. The flow is impecable and your ideas are expressed better than clearly. Excellent write, I'm glad I got the chance to read it. Thank-you for taking the time to enter my contest. I wish you well when I judge.
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This is a great write- I hope you know that.
It's completely true. ALso, a girl can do it too.
Keep up the killer work, take care, and keep on writing! Good luck in my contest and all the others too
~Princess of Shadows~
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