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Sit - Lanturne

 

Sit

gazing

open your

loving heart and

soul

 

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Lantourne Form- syllable count 1-2-3-4-1

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  • lingonberries
    March 5, 2007

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    Interesting form "Lantourne", I like it! It's so simple, but the words give it so much meaning. And it's easy to put yourself in this poem!! Good job!


  • Agent Double Oh No
    February 24, 2007

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    Pretty picture and pretty words. I don't know about this form of writing, I write mostly free verse but I like this! You said alot in few words. _ADOM


  • My Darkness
    February 21, 2007

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    awww i agree! we all need to love and be loved! great job with this, i love the style, short and sweet! good luck in the contest!


  • Walking shadow
    February 19, 2007

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    Just took my breath away. This picture above. The simple but powerful poem included. WOW! Stunning. You are one heck of a GREAT poet indeed. I admire your works.


  • Spiritvision angel
    February 19, 2007
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    This is so peaceful sis! love it.


  • joyya
    February 17, 2007

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    I like!

    A new form, this is beautiful. So romantic, Oh bother, it just makes me emotional. Love the picture too.


  • Kari gold member
    February 17, 2007

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    Wow Very well done on the Lantourne form. It was very sweet. The best of luck to you in the contest.
    Kari


  • Spiritual Nature
    February 17, 2007

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    Beautifully written. I had never seen the lantourne form before. I really enjoyed this.

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