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Goal!

Adrenaline surges through your veins...
You breathe deeply...
Your heart beats through your chest...
Soccer
You watch your opponents closely...
And wait for that moment to steal the ball...
You yearn to snach that ball and run to victory...
Soccer
Sweat drips down your face...
It comes closer...closer...
But you force yourself to wait for the right moment...
Soccer
The right moment approaches...
And you steal the soccer ball from your opponent!
You race down the feild!
You weave, you jump, you kick!!!
GOAL!!!!
The winning goal!
Victory! Triumph!
Your team has won!

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 18, 2007

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    wow, thiat is sweet, you know that got me rushing, edge of my seat, i guess cause i could see it throught your words from my eyes, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest