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All out of Love



A day for couples
holding hands
sneaking kisses
giving gifts of grandeur
Chocolate hearts
Lusicious Red Roses
Teddy Bears
and arms to be wrapped in

They walk holding hands
caressing eachother
Smiling freely
in restaurants across town
Luxiourous hotels
nights of passion
orgasmic bliss
and a valentine to call their own

Their bodies intertwine...
silk sheets...
rose petals...
As their pleasure mounts
Scratch marks
soft moans
she cries out
and falls asleep in his arms

A valentine's day to remember...

I watch them
again
year after year
and I
am still alone
purchasing for myself
a lowely rose
wilting..
but mine
and a lovely toy
to love me
Now that is my Valentine

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  • saxophonicwolf
    March 20, 2007

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    ooooh. Nice write. It started off light and fluffy, and then it took a 180. Whew! I feel for the narrator. I hope she finds her valentine someday.


  • honey bear
    February 23, 2007
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    oh this said i had not commented on it but i have !


  • Fox-Reaper
    February 21, 2007

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    Their bodies intertwine...
    silk sheets...
    rose petals...
    As their pleasure mounts
    Scratch marks
    soft moans
    she cries out
    and falls asleep in his arms

    this part i like
    and i hope you had a great Valentine's Day
    great write you have done well

  • honey bear
    February 20, 2007

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    this was such a sweet and loving write and then you hit me with the sadness and loneliness, then i saw the title of the contest.. aww you made me sad


  • Memoirs of a Girl
    February 17, 2007
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    Wow. Very dirty and yet so sad and true. Thank you for entering and good luck!

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