fire afoot
dance across the rainbow dais
plunge into the goddess' pool
and pray for resurrection
final voyage of the cloud
rip the heart-
fire afoot in this soul
A contest entry
- seven lines.... 15 minutes...... by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended February 17, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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sounds a little weird, no offense cheebs. Too dark in the spiritual sense-if you know what I mean. Ritualistic. But that's my take on it. Its poetic, for sure. So keep it up!
pegleg -
I am praying for the final voyage. Can't come soon enough for me. This is a great write. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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Thought provoking and deep. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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