When I put flute to mouth
to play
your name
Wind
blows my breath
away
So sweetly
it would
have sung
for you
We know your lips
In a list
A contest entry
- Payback (Quickie) by sheltered.
450 points, ended February 18, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very original and refreshing.
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This is quite lovely and floats like the leaves in a summer wind. Best wishes to you in this contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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thank you butterfly. This picture really spoke to me..I have kept it for just this purpose.
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{groans} Exquisite, my Sister...I played the flute in 5th grade...Wish I hadn't stopped...What an incredible metaphor, my dear Friend...Great graphic, too...& yes, your song is sweet...What a loss it is for him...Good luck in the contest, dear Lady...
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so many have lost the reason to listen, ya think?
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