I'm sitting at my desk, half-listening to the teacher drone
But I'm looking out the window to the outdoors below.
The sun is shining and the sky was bright.
I yearned to go out and just play in the sun.
I dreamed of going to the park and take a walk in nature,
Going to the pool and hanging out with my friends.
I doodled idly on a piece of paper and didn't pay attention.
It was silent with the birds chirping cheerfully
BRRRING!!! The bell disturbed the beautiful silence.
I grabbed my things and ran outside.
I yelled to the world, "Now I'm FREE!"
A contest entry
- SMILE YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL by .
575 points, ended February 28, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem~ Keep up the good work~ Good luck to you in the contest!
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I noticed that you changed tense several times. However, I completely agree with your poem. I am a senior in High School, I can't wait until I graduate! Thanks for entering my contest.
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I love the freedom celebrated at the end of the write,
reminds me of summer days, and fun,
thankyou for this entery, and good luck -
LOL, and what a great feeling it is to be free! BEAUTIFUL WRITE OF A DAY DREAM, TURNED REAL.
Enjoyable little write.
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