Maybe I'll win this time...?
but
my name has a knack for
running in the opposite direction,
when I need it most.
and you have this way about you.
You're a liar, a thief,
a fucking lunatic.
Yeah, so am I-
it's just I;;
am better at covering it up.
baby, get used to it-
it's my [[self-employed]] job
to put people in moods like this,
or at least;;
make them cry.
& you're "not in the mood to talk right now"?
well honey,
I
-NEVER-
wanted to
'cause what I say,think,feel
doesn't matter
and I don't care
about caring anymore.
I'm just scared of what I might scream;
what you might do,
but I just wanted to thank you
for being over a million
poems on my pages
that you'll never
want,never ask to read.
&& no, I'm not mad
I'm just sad that
in a matter of seconds,
I know
I won't love you At All
anymore...
Author notes
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/Kit_kat_katie05/loveee.jpg
option 1, picture 1
♥ you kat face! =]
sorry that this is a bit random... I was on the phone and started an arguement, then wrote this down because I had been wanting to write about that picture.....
so didn't quite turn out the way I wanted.
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A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty Inspiration. [clicky] by Hell In Harmony.
425 points, ended February 17, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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woah! fucking amazing.
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damn babe. I love it. It's pretty much exactly how I've been feeling lately.
about everything. About Manipulation.
About Killing people on the inside just for personal entertainment.
I know. I'm fucked up.
I love you.
I'm SOOOO fucking glad you wrote this.
It really just hit me..
Dammit Crash, you just bitchslapped me.
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i love you to death, and adore your comments!
"About Killing people on the inside just for personal entertainment."
heh. sounds VERY familiar!
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Awesome. I like this..it's just incredible.
just wanted to thank you
for being over a million
poems on my pages
that you'll never
want,never ask to read.
I love that part, it puts in me in mind of how I've always felt.
Awesome. Love the title too.
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thank you so much!
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oh gawd.
this is me.
exactly.
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Whoa...... I love this piece so much.
baby, get used to it-
it's my [[self-employed]] job
to put people in moods like this,
that part stuck out.
lol i like it like muchos
and i love this part too.
& you're "not in the mood to talk right now"?
well honey,
I
-NEVER-
wanted to
bravo!
♥
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thanks so much for the awesome comments!!! =]
I love your name btw...xx
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"to put people in moods like this,
or at least;;
make them cry"
--I used to be like this. Every so often I'd actually let someone in and they'd feel at home with me but then I'd go do something to make them disappointed and hurt. Eh, sometimes we're just like this. It's really just us being scared of life. Also, I hate when people say "I'm not in the mood to talk right now" ... you'll never be in the mood so you might as well get it done with now ah, people. -
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haha, so true. =]
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yes, and it does get to that point, believe it or not. I've written books they've never read. And I'm glad. both about the books and about the fact that they've never read them. LOL. Wicked and unto ourselves.
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Loved the tone of this piece.
It was so wicked.
And there are so many things I could quote but there is just sooooooooooooooo much!
goodness.
this poem just sizzled
&& hissed profanities.
<3 you.
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but I just wanted to thank you
for being over a million
poems on my pages
that you'll never
want,never ask to read
this poem reminds me of an old muse.
Beautiful of course as usual.
Hope all is well with you btw.
Your poetry always reminds me of
the beauty in the world even the
cliched kind or the beauty in scars]
and tears. I'm rambling on so I'll
leave it as this. Don't stop being
you. Your brilliant.
PS your title reminds me of the
lyrics from a bright eyes song....
"Like Love is some kind of lottery,
where you can scratch and see what is underneath. It's "Sorry",
just one cherry, "Play Again." Get lucky."
I was listening to this song while I read the title of
your poem. Felt like sharing.
♥
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yeah, it was inspired by that song a bit, cause I LOVE bright eyes to death,
and when I saw the picture it reminded me of a love lottery =]
that's cool that you picked up on it! hehe
<333 you.
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AWESOME.AWESOME.AWESOME
& you're "not in the mood to talk right now"?
well honey,
I
-NEVER-
wanted to
'cause what I say,think,feel
doesn't matter
and I don't care
--
And your ending, was perfect.perfect.perfect. I loved it, I could relate to it so much! !
"&& no, I'm not mad
I'm just sad that
in a matter of seconds,
I know
I won't love you At All
anymore... -
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thanks for the ab.fab comment doll!
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Incredible
This was pumping!! You say it didnt turn out the way you wanted - maybe you could go back and touch-up what you think it's missing. And since this is a contest entry,,,you might want to spell-check - you forgot the "o" in [[self-employed]]
Reading this it doesnt seem like it is missing anything - haha & I love your style - your inspiration never seems to run dry and you could feel it in this piece. Grabs your attention
Best of luck in the contest!!
_nOva
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thanks so much for the comment/suggestions, I appreciate it lots =]
[haha, I think I said that last time... the whole appreciation thing..... but I'm serious]
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"&& no, I'm not mad
I'm just sad that
in a matter of seconds,
I know
I won't love you At All
anymore... "
Hunnie;;
I'm starting to hate leaving comments (especially for amazing author's like you) because I say the same shit every single time. But this truly is incredible;; it always is. Not to mention a great muse also =]
loveyou♥
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no hun, i a.d.o.r.e. your comments!
but I know what you mean, I say the same thing almost every time....
♥
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