Did this happen in my dreams
The quickening of pulse,
The flying of butterflies in my stomach
But what is your name?
Such a memory
one I can't point out
but I swear you are real
I swear you make me feel
They tell me it's not true
they tell me that you are existless
and yet, I think of you anew
with every sunrise
I swear I can feel your every touch
I swear I can feel your love
And I do believe I love you.
Author notes
It's about a guy who makes up a girl then believes it.
Option 2, btw.
A contest entry
- February New Member's Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended March 14, 2007, 76 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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My God.. this is fabulous. I've always loved such dreamy writes.. and yes, its tue I tell you
Thankyou for the entry and for following the rules.
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Very interesting read. I think in ways many of us "make up" that perfect person in our own minds and believe there is actually a real person to fit what we have created..
Enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing. Good luck to you in the contest.
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Very creative
Very unique and very creative! So much enjoyed this! I wish you all the best in the contest and thank you for sharing! -
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Thank you ^_^
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I think you did a great job with this. You can almost see the guy and his struggle to find what he has created in his mind. Please include the opition number in the authors comments so that you wont be DQ. Thanks for the entry and I wish you luck
Despair
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^_^ thank you.
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