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The Ridst Wake of the Night

Rain is shining through the night,
When it shatters through the light
When the sunlight shone it bright
Shining all the days we like

When the shadows crept and reborn
We show nothing as a respond
Heave our souls and correspond
To the ridst wake of the night

Death remains the feeling of misery
Like zombies jump and flee
When the world, crumbles, and fall
We shall be dead together once more

In a coffin, where our corpse will lay
Decomposed to the earth, we shall not pray
On our knees we begged for mercy
But who will save this from happening?

We seek here, no one will save us
As we are mortal creatures of this planet
Where the hamadryad will turn and brake
Where shame announce the vale of tears

Before dreams that goes to show us
Caught in the net of weary shadows
We tread along the silent meadows
To worship the life we treasure upon

Rain is shining through the night,
When it shatters through the light
When the sunlight shone it bright
Shining all the days we like

When the shadows crept and reborn
We show nothing as a respond
Heave our souls and correspond
To the ridst wake of the night

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Not sure if it's a song or a poem. Either which is good for me! Tehe!

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  • Bosky
    February 17, 2007
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    Wow, very good, but one thing that's bugging me is you spelled shining wrong. Only one "n"! Great work!

    Cassie