Kindly read what is written below
Isn't it really sexy?
Sucking on a big penis
Swallowing a pint of sperm
And begging for a fuck
Can't you imagine my tongue
Under your ball-bag
Naked tits shoved in your face
Taunting you to come
You really have to squirt
Cunt in your mouth
Orgasm pounding as I scream
Cocksucking mother fucker
Kindly give me the gold prize
A contest entry
- Sexy Acrostics by Im Not A Slapper.
375 points, ended February 18, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LOW LIFE CONTEST by Gerald Flagellation.
425 points, ended December 22, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Holy Cock-a-moly!!!
Izzit me, or izzit it really hot in here?
This is probably the most erotic acockstic
....I mean acrostic poem I have ever read
I can see why it took the gold!Congrats on winning and thank you for sharing this heated poem with us.
DT
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Well, at least this is funny. I really like the word "ball-bag". I've never heard that one before. You deserve a clap for that.
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Probably the worst acrostic ever written.
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does it really feel nice behind the balls?
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WOW, in my day, GROSSLY said...don't think I have ever wanted something that much...maybe it will work...lol...you have guts..thanks for sharing
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No, not for me
I can't even appologise for saying so. This is just mucky.
Petit Moineau -
This was quite different...Not the content..the write..LOL
Very well done..You won the gold as you requested in your last line..LOL
Soulful Woman
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Still very well written even for being somewhat crude. I definetely still enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it with me
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lol funny
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Teefuckinghee!
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jus don't want pussy with good taste, jus want pussy that taste good! This made me laugh and is playfully rude. I give three bunnies.
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Wow
Dude,
that was crude AND rude..
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hmmm. this is interesting. its rather rude, youre right, but judging by the responses of people, crude dirty language is covered by poetic liscence. congrats of making it this far in the contest. good luck
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WOW....
You're a TRIP...but... kiss a cunty cock??? lol. That's a new one on me...is that a dick fresh out of the pussy???? lmao
Sahabah -
Too crude to be what I consider Erotica. Just a bunch of dirty words thrown together. Where's the poetic aspect? Where's the art of language? But I think you were just doing this for fun judging by your closing line.
It may have worked - you made it to the finals.
Cris -
Now, this really is rather rude- it's also fairly sexy........I guess if you don't ask these days, you don't get. Good luck in the contest.
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