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A Note To Jason:

i can't remember why i walked away
why the alchol in your hair
will always stay

but i keep on moving on
lingering further
until you write that song

i keep holding tighter though plee
just keep on wondering
do you really want me

times of uncertainty
an awaited goodbye
never will i have to cry

i will never forget you
you will never leave me
but with someone else is where i need to be

i try not to kiss you
to get wrapped up in your game
i have to go now, please don't say my name

we are no longer them
we are no longer us
we are separated though means of trust

it is now just you
it is now just me

lets walk in separate directions
so the rest of our life we can see.

Author notes

i need to write things like this..and jason[b] will go online and be like wtf..but no its not about him. and after reading it he should know that.

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  • Poetryistherapy
    February 27, 2007

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    I think that in order to truly understand this poem, you need to know the entire situation behind it's inspiration. Other than that, I think you wrote this well.


  • SemiAutomatic
    February 22, 2007

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    ^_^...its pretty sam...who are you talking about??? but the poem reminds me what its like to be in love. you know, loving someone and holding your breath for them to love you back. i suffocate sometimes.

    ::tear::

    i love you thoughh so its ok!! XD


    • artisticxpoetry
      February 25, 2007
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      uh well the first two stanza's are actually about kyle..cuz this summer we were gonna write a song together..i would write the lyrics and he would do the music..he never told me if he finished it :[ he prob didn't but the general poem is about my x boyfriend jason...i haven't seen him in a really long time...once at this religious thing i thought i saw him accross the way through this glass divider[uber religous thing where men and women sit on different sides] so i wanted to go talk to him, go see him, but then when i looked again he was gone :[ it was very sad!