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I'm at a loss for words
I cant express the pain
you took it all from me
its all such a strain

I want the feelings to leave
cant I just forget
everything you did to me
I wish we hadnt met

What is there left to say
you hurt me and ripped me apart
how could I be so blind
why didnt I listen to my heart

dont tell me you love me
your just full of those lies
was our relationship just a game
was what you did to me the prize











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  • rockon
    February 17, 2007
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    Tres bien

    this is really good, nice rhyming scheme and it flows really well, so nice work! Just forget him