Waning, writhing, tang of the sound,
Deep and melodic,
Enigmatic, providing,
Sustaining, maintaining, colliding,
terrorizing.
Strong and sweet, rushing and flowing,
Moves now, through you, around you,
The storm, the love, the climactic tune.
Distance fades away, embrace comes to hand,
Finding a newer level, a sweeter taste,
A former self, a newer brand.
This new sound, what is it my soul hears?
Where it clenches and holds and drives away all fears?
Where life is comprehended in all its majesty,
And nothing compares to the loss of travesty
And sucking you in you find the beyond,
You find where heaven and God came from.
The mystery of eternity, there was no place,
Can one see the fiery face?
Dare not look, the sound is too great,
What would it be like to see raw fate?
To glimpse what I feel,
The sound becomes real,
And now, now it beholds the sight of the ethereal,
This, this is the world of an eternal trance.
A contest entry
- If Music Could Speak to Poetry . . . by and the tide rises.
500 points, ended September 8, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Who or what do you love?...I am Paying It Forward by pearl-dragon.
525 points, ended September 9, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rock On. Music Is What Drives Us. by PolkaDot.
600 points, ended October 8, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Kinda sounds like a lullaby, very pretty. Thank you so much for entering.
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I guess this could lull me into a trance. The sounds are repetitive, but not musical to my ears. Thanks for entering.
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Thank you very much for entering my contest. You feel a great deal within your music and I feel a great deal lurking within your words. Very well said.
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"This new sound, what is it my soul hears?
Where it clenches and holds and drives away all fears?
Where life is comprehended in all its majesty,
And nothing compares to the loss of travesty
And sucking you in you find the beyond,
You find where heaven and God came from."
he he this is excellent Powerful melody has to be heavenly nothing earthly encompasses you in such a way.
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Wow thought provoking, quite a daunting yet slightly fascinating idea. Good piece of poetry
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