Lily and lily,
ticklish; tender delight
ends - mutual smile.
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I like this!
It is very nice haiku that you wrote....you are talented
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I really like this poem!!
it is a very nice haiku!
and i like the hidden meaning
kudos my friend
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Good job with this one i really liked it. You are a very talented writer and i hope that you will just keep getting better. Good job and keep up the good work.
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I enjoyed it!
I really enjoyed this. Moments like that are always so sweet. In just a few lines..you painted a picture that really gave me a visual of two people sharing a special moment. I think this is great. I did get the play on the "Lily and Lily." It sort of serves as a reminder that no matter how different we are in some ways..we all enjoy the same tender moments..so maybe we really aren't all that different. Good Job! Keep it up! -
Great work!
Short sweet and to the point. i like em like that. haha. Keep up the good work. i don't get the lily and lily thing, but that's okay. i still liked it.
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For some crazy reason this poem is really...up lifting and happy..Which is odd considering it is so short, but I like it! - Lovely x
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i love haiku's and its well written but im confused about lily and lily. i think i may have an idea, but im not sure. what did you mean? nice job.
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I've given this considerable thought, but before my morning coffee and I haven't a clue. You have it listed under family and relationships but you said to think sexual. That's leading me to a place I don't want to go.
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This is sweet and uplifting. I don't know if I get the relationship between Lily and lily..either twins or a mirror image. This is what is so wonderful..it can be left to the reader's imagination. Well done.
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Not really sure what it means but the flow is great and it brings a feeling of happiness. Well done. Keep them coming and blessed be.
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Thanks everyone.
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Excellent
Beautiful Haiku with wonderful imagery and a feel good factor ~ brought a smile to my face in the reading ~ a delight to find....Blessings...
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A short poem that is not short on the delight that it brings. It has a very happy tone that leaves me with a smile. Well done dear poet.
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This is a beautiful work of poetry. The rythm and scheme is very inviting and lovely.
Flows so well, and sends a distinct message.Most creative and thought provoking.... Another beautiful piece my friend! Be blessed and thanks for sharing your incredible talent!
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